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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » February 22nd, 2011, 3:40 pm

on vacation
they carry equipment to the beach, so they do not have to move, much
they spray sun screen on their very white bodies.
if any of the locals smoke cigarettes they whisper and stare
they dont know what kind of mens trunks you need here so you dont get a rash on your balls from the sand
the women are pretty bleached, plastic surgury, fake tits.rich
i watch them
i am a beautiful tall single woman
i saunter right thru all that honeymoon fanatsy island stuff
the men look at me
the women get all freaked out
the men are saggy like the gym bodies
the women are chunky skinny sad uptight
laughing girls
i like the rich guy with blond twin girlfriends the best
they play volleyball and freak tourist couples out
i love it here
i have been a woman in a couple
it is so much harder
to be horney married
than single
men want you to wait around until they want to give you some
sleep over and stuff
hostage resigned
nope
not again
my dreamtime is mine
no more intrusive couple compromise crap
no negotations
no one telling me when to do anything
thanx
couples need that

after divorse
i fucked the guy at the pawn shop
just to see if it worked
he asked me to sleep over
i said"oh no, thats how it all starts"
that hurt him
he danced, cooked had money
but no more coupling
see, they have these projects
and i am supposed to want to do that to-
nope
i guess the best part of what i love is my walk
tired of hearing talk
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

snowman
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Re: couples

Post by snowman » April 14th, 2011, 5:13 am

reminds me of the john cougar song i need a lover that wont drive me crazy
write on
dave

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Re: couples

Post by saw » April 14th, 2011, 6:40 am

any relationship ( not necessarily a marriage) has its highs & lows...the good stuff can be really good and the bad stuff.....well...the bad stuff can make you sick....

I get very vivid images of your walk....strolling along the beach...liken it to
"people-watching" at the airport...trying to imagine what they are all about...

and walks have always been the best way for me to think....I lived in the Florida Keys for 8 years so I can also dig the tourist scene you speak of, as well....

good stuff, c-soul
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: couples

Post by creativesoul » April 14th, 2011, 2:09 pm

yes it is interesting- the whole wild thang, love and webs and tides- im good... aloha=thanx for the feedback- always love it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: couples

Post by creativesoul » April 21st, 2011, 3:30 pm

i felt it
when he hit the ground
was eating a salad and i stood up and was yelling-owowowow
looked like one fool
yet later on when they were trying to figure out
if they could quit playing God
and put him on a plane
take some pictures of his insides
i could see them from across the ocean
yet...he is my friend
family and i got him home
away from the woman that pushed him off a two story building
his wife
so much for sixteen cats in fiji
and a wife on anti-depressants
he would never say
what really happened
says he cannot remember
but i have seen her soul

she cannot hide from my healing prayers
although she might try
i know that love can bring some ugliest of emotions
when all the reasons to be there suddenly are evicted
homelessness of the heart
is a very beautiful place
less security, more faith
sometimes while looking back
the questions of what was all that commotion
that was control
some absurd reaction to fear
he still thinks that he can drink beer
looks like a troll
nothing is ever going to fil that hole
God is not a white man sitting behind a desk
if he is
i know a few that are going to grab him by the neck
at any rate= Creator has some good jokes
just gotta listen
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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