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LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 4:49 am
by Cher
perfect sphere silver
tidal pull ebb low and far
time for sand in toes
hot body cool waters
dipping toes in frothy waves
sizzling couple re-engage
eastern breezes touch skin
swollen mouths cool souls refreshed
love burns hot again
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 12:28 pm
by Steve Plonk
Cher, Great lunar love poem!
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 1:28 pm
by dadio
yes, yes. very good poem.
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 1:52 pm
by Cher
Thanks guys.. I was trying for a haiku trio..not sure if i got it..but whose counting syllables..I just throw it to the wind.....
Glad you liked it
Cher
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 6:13 pm
by Perdida
really really lovely Cher, love the ending line especially.
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: February 26th, 2011, 7:14 pm
by Cher
Thanks guys....I have quite a few more pieces on my blog..you are welcome to go take a look and comment if you like...
I am preparing my anthology so the pieces are there
http://www.cherbeautyglam.blogspot.com
again thank you for your lovely comments here.
Regards
Cher
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: March 1st, 2011, 3:35 pm
by joel
Cher wrote:but whose counting syllables..I just throw it to the wind.....
...there's another heiku tucked in your wisdom....
Re: LUNA AMORE by Cher
Posted: March 1st, 2011, 4:39 pm
by Cher
Thanks guys