dear innocence --

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mindbum
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dear innocence --

Post by mindbum » March 2nd, 2011, 12:27 pm

godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Re: dear innocence --

Post by joel » March 2nd, 2011, 4:38 pm

this is about my third time coming back to read this today...or maybe a second and it just feels like I've read it a long time ago (which doesn't mean it doesn't feel fresh, of course)...just that I always like your work and the art it creates on different levels...and that it's nice to enjoy it briefly before I look and read it too often and find myself, fittingly, blessedly, lost.
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Re: dear innocence --

Post by Hollweg » March 2nd, 2011, 7:34 pm

I like this well.

The closing of "with guilty notes" in a letter to innocence is very good.

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Re: dear innocence --

Post by Arcadia » March 2nd, 2011, 11:17 pm

enjoyed the audio! :D it sounded different in my head read by me..! :lol: , bravo!

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Re: dear innocence --

Post by mindbum » March 3rd, 2011, 3:16 am

thanks joel. i'm glad you've enjoyed this one. more to come. oh boy. let's get innocently lost. this series is a fun one. it has a good tone & motion.

hollweg - thanks for reading.

arcadia-- thanks muchy. glad you enjoyed the audio. i enjoy making it.

peace. thanks all.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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Re: dear innocence --

Post by dadio » March 3rd, 2011, 10:06 am

top notch poem. 8)

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Re: dear innocence --

Post by saw » March 4th, 2011, 7:21 am

the audio is exceptional, .....a haunting expression of words and sounds woven into an artistic piece that compels the listener to stay tuned.....

cool !
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Re: dear innocence --

Post by mindbum » March 4th, 2011, 4:55 pm

thank ye dadio.

saw- thank ye much. glad ye enjoyed the audio. the singing bowls are my current superobsession noisemakers. maybe there'll be something new soon. i love to find the noise that goes behind the talking.

thanks again.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

-maxwell bodenheim

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