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dear innocence --
Posted: March 2nd, 2011, 12:27 pm
by mindbum
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 2nd, 2011, 4:38 pm
by joel
this is about my third time coming back to read this today...or maybe a second and it just feels like I've read it a long time ago (which doesn't mean it doesn't feel fresh, of course)...just that I always like your work and the art it creates on different levels...and that it's nice to enjoy it briefly before I look and read it too often and find myself, fittingly, blessedly, lost.
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 2nd, 2011, 7:34 pm
by Hollweg
I like this well.
The closing of "with guilty notes" in a letter to innocence is very good.
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 2nd, 2011, 11:17 pm
by Arcadia
enjoyed the audio!

it sounded different in my head read by me..!

, bravo!
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 3rd, 2011, 3:16 am
by mindbum
thanks joel. i'm glad you've enjoyed this one. more to come. oh boy. let's get innocently lost. this series is a fun one. it has a good tone & motion.
hollweg - thanks for reading.
arcadia-- thanks muchy. glad you enjoyed the audio. i enjoy making it.
peace. thanks all.
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 3rd, 2011, 10:06 am
by dadio
top notch poem.

Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 4th, 2011, 7:21 am
by saw
the audio is exceptional, .....a haunting expression of words and sounds woven into an artistic piece that compels the listener to stay tuned.....
cool !
Re: dear innocence --
Posted: March 4th, 2011, 4:55 pm
by mindbum
thank ye dadio.
saw- thank ye much. glad ye enjoyed the audio. the singing bowls are my current superobsession noisemakers. maybe there'll be something new soon. i love to find the noise that goes behind the talking.
thanks again.