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the urgency of new

Posted: March 8th, 2011, 9:02 am
by saw
her love shriveled
like a water-logged leather boot
that could no longer be coerced
upon an unwilling foot

the fracture she was told
would heal if she was mindful
not to exceed the suicidal speed
of all frustrated romantic gimps

those that oh so often ignore
the chemistry of fresh paint
leave their fidgety fingerprints
all over the place, in the wet latex

of wanting to get-on-with-it,
slow down my friend I said,
breathe deeply, the wind is
strong, and the day is young

Re: the urgency of new

Posted: March 8th, 2011, 9:21 am
by dadio
good poem with fine word structure and theme.

Re: the urgency of new

Posted: March 8th, 2011, 12:59 pm
by Arcadia
he loved to play the doctor part
his calm maybe a sweet charade
-when he was not too serious-
my wounds, his passport

loved the title, saw! :)

Re: the urgency of new

Posted: March 9th, 2011, 7:33 am
by saw
dadio & arcadia....thank you

Re: the urgency of new

Posted: March 11th, 2011, 10:52 pm
by joel
I'm no vet
neither war's nor animal medicine's
but I know enough as joel
that when a filly or a foal
is whom I meet on the side of the street
or battlefield
or racetrack
with a broken leg and worn-out tack
that only this advice is true:
"You'd have to slow down, if I were you."
And then I'd whisper gently
before I'd shoot.