tidal wave warning

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creativesoul
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tidal wave warning

Post by creativesoul » March 11th, 2011, 3:52 am

i told a woman i know
i was feeling like something was happening with the ocean floor
apparently the spirits always tell me the truth
but prayer is powerful
i went to the light house
asked a woman in the dark
for a light
i still smoke see
she had one
as it turns out waiting for a tidal wave in the dark is very revealing
people tell secrets... we do not know if it will drown us in our sleep
yet we have these moments
in the wind overlooking the sea
wondering about all the children and people here
their safety in this dreamtime
please- this island is the closest to family i got- besides my sons, whom are to me sometimes the sun and the moon and the tides
they formed inside me with their fathers love and However God got into it, my grandparents.... i imagine there are alot of things
naked to the human eyes
that i will see again, but tonite, i ask for all of our safety....
megwich Creator
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: tidal wave warning

Post by saw » March 11th, 2011, 9:55 am

a fine prayer c-soul........it can't hurt, right ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: tidal wave warning

Post by Arcadia » March 11th, 2011, 12:45 pm

I hope you, your family and your dear island are bien at the moment...! gracias for sharing your lines, abrazote!

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Re: tidal wave warning

Post by joel » March 11th, 2011, 12:46 pm

...and so needed for so many and for so many reasons...
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Re: tidal wave warning

Post by creativesoul » March 11th, 2011, 1:27 pm

i guess prayer works huh? still here
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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