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Void
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:03 am
by e_dog
void where permitted
the law of the rope
is to swing
under my arm
is another arm --
this one holds an answer
to all the problems
life posed --
back when there
was a god
i worshipped her
each morning
now, on the horizon
is just
more sand
but
in truth
the abyss
is everywhere
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:07 am
by e_dog
darn, this formatting don't alow line staggering, visual arrangements, as intended!
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:13 am
by Lightning Rod
love this piece, dog
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:15 am
by e_dog
thanks, lrod.
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:23 am
by Lightning Rod
what's not to like?
It's short and it has a sharp point.
bravo again
Posted: February 3rd, 2005, 12:27 am
by Doreen Peri
hey e-d
try formatting it in Word or whatever word processor you use, then use the html "pre" tag.. meaning "preformatted"...
< pre >text you have preformatted < /pre >... but without the spaces between the brackets and "pre'
see if that works
i've set it up so it should but haven't tried it yet.
you've got some good lines in this piece!
i worshipped her each morning, too, when i believed
but i will continue to worship morning, no matter how harshly she may greet me