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when the wind rusts

Posted: March 16th, 2011, 6:21 am
by saw
when the wind rusts
my true face is revealed
in the oxidation of the clouds

when the sun shrivels
strangled by my departures
into cyclical madness

I play Stevie Wonder
Songs in the Key of Life
til the elements of breathing

return to their roost

Re: when the wind rusts

Posted: March 16th, 2011, 3:41 pm
by dadio
Good poem & theme.

Re: when the wind rusts

Posted: March 16th, 2011, 11:06 pm
by judih
when the peacock shrieks
my inner bird
responds

as i do to this poem, Steve
(this is a compliment!)

Re: when the wind rusts

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 6:18 am
by saw
thanx dadio......and liked your teeny poem as well judih...let the inner bird fly, my friend....

Re: when the wind rusts

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 10:54 am
by Arcadia
when the wind rusts..., powerful image, gracias!! :)