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FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 18th, 2011, 4:55 pm
by dadio
Whether the fat dame
Has a good sex life,
Bud doesn’t know, he
Doesn’t want to think

About it too much,
Nor imagine he
Making love to her
As such, but guesses

She has feelings like
Everybody else,
Needs to be loved and
Cared for, wants to feel

Wanted and of some
Value, but what can
A thin guy do? Bud
Muses, seeing her

Asleep in the big
Armchair, butt naked
Like some huge beached whale.
He creeps closer on

Tiptoe, listens to
Her breathe, watches the
Rise and fall of her
Huge bust, takes in her

Sizable thighs where
One of her hand lies.
He wants to think she’s
Loved and wanted by

Someone, maybe fucked
By some brave fellow
(No, not brave, maybe
Kind and big-hearted).

He backs away (she’s
Just farted) but there
Is some beauty there:
The tone of skin, the

Loving heart, maybe,
Dark black hair. Whose dame
She is he doesn’t
Know; he hopes they’re worth

Her love and care and
Treat her kindly in
Her sad days and dark
Despair. Bud takes one

Final look at her
And blows her a kiss
As she sleeps in the
Big black leather chair

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 8:38 am
by saw
great work dadio.....a dose of innocent humor from the speaker carries this, and what a surprise, ... I was caught up in the my empathy for the fat woman, when she unexpectedly farted on me...ha ha......an interesting veer

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 1:32 pm
by dadio
human is human. Thank you for reading & understanding this, saw. 8)

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 1:41 pm
by judih
fat is beautiful
compassion opens eyes in this piece, dadio
and lucien freud - well, the painting is marvelous

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 3:43 pm
by dadio
Judih, thank you.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 19th, 2011, 8:52 pm
by WIREMAN
i'm laughing at this word play....when i ride the bus those big butts sure do get in the way.....awesome painting!

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 4:04 am
by dadio
Thank you, Wireman. Yes, I love Lucien Freud's art.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 9:42 am
by creativesoul
best love is on my insides, fat or thin- i just cant win...

i love this...

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 9:51 am
by dadio
Thank you, creative soul.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 10:56 am
by Arcadia
Skinny design,
wide space for dreams.
She rests.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 11:24 am
by dadio
Merci, Arcadia.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 12:16 pm
by Hollweg
In my experience
with love, the bigger they are,
the harder they fall.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: March 20th, 2011, 3:09 pm
by dadio
thank you for reading, hollweg.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: April 26th, 2011, 6:42 pm
by merlynh
You were really on your creative voice on this one. Really like the read, and the clever wording was wonderful. You're really gifted.

I know I have the same curse.

Re: FAT DAMES LOVE. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Posted: April 27th, 2011, 2:43 am
by dadio
thank you for reading & comments, Merlynh