embers of oblivion

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WIREMAN
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embers of oblivion

Post by WIREMAN » March 19th, 2011, 8:33 pm

wish i had known
you were coming
through town
way back when
how to play
the clown
it's the traveling
that's easy
as we burn
in the return
wading waters so deep
as we creep upon
the embers of oblivion
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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: embers of oblivion

Post by dadio » March 20th, 2011, 9:56 am

Strong poem.

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Re: embers of oblivion

Post by Arcadia » March 20th, 2011, 11:00 am

you are my favourite prophet, wireman!!! :D bravo!!!!

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Post by WIREMAN » March 20th, 2011, 12:49 pm

thanks my friends.....i'm getting ready for a big poetry show tuesday night....doreen will be there too....
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Post by saw » March 20th, 2011, 1:45 pm

cool stuff brother mark, wish i was free to join you and doreen....sounds like a good time.....perhaps dino will show up, if he can get a ride out there....
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Re: embers of oblivion

Post by Arcadia » March 20th, 2011, 9:17 pm

hey!, great...!!! :D best vibes for doreen, dino (perhaps) and you next tuesday!!!!! Enjoy and share later here what you want!!!!!

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Re: embers of oblivion

Post by joel » March 22nd, 2011, 1:10 pm

Wait...if this means you were all out and speaking yesterday, then I'm sorry I missed it...if I could have swung it...but I hope it was a blessed evening for the arts and the artists you all are. Awesome poem, Wman!
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Re: embers of oblivion

Post by WIREMAN » March 22nd, 2011, 5:43 pm

show is tonite joe;!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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