Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

a stark look at the restraints and overbearing aura of feeling lifeless ....i was particularly fond of stanza five, though all were very good at driving the emotions home....( typo in 5...I assume stings should be strings )......what you address can be so challenging in a world with limited examples that motivate one to dance....
enjoyed this.....

Yeah, ditto...enjoyed this. I really like the gentle waves of hope and despair...the question of what makes a living...the indepedence, dependence and codependence that permeate the only life I really know. I really like it.

Thanx for the kind words, I think at times I begin writing from one perspective then meld them w/another...and not sure if it reads that way and is obvious...any honest feedback is welcomed.