the store

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sonofthesun
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the store

Post by sonofthesun » March 29th, 2011, 2:30 am

ive been to the store
and ive bought things
but i was still in want
as for what i need
wasnt for sale
as i stare into your eyes
my life bleeds
infinity beckons
and i pray
not for forgiveness
but understanding
will you welcome me?
There is no empty space

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dadio
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Re: the store

Post by dadio » March 29th, 2011, 3:31 am

I hope they will. moving poem.

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Re: the store

Post by ButterflyKiss » March 29th, 2011, 2:49 pm

Wow! Very good!
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Re: the store

Post by snowman » April 8th, 2011, 9:09 am

understanding is better than acceptance wonderfully moving poem short and powerful
write on

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mnaz
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Re: the store

Post by mnaz » April 10th, 2011, 3:56 pm

not always possible to buy one's self out of want... true.

this one reminded me of that sonic youth tune... i can hear kim gordon now, "come on down to the store, you can buy some more, more, more, more"...

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