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the mysteries there

Posted: March 31st, 2011, 2:01 pm
by the mingo
who has killed who today ?
who will kill who tomorrow ?
I take my small boat out on the water
I take a bag of fig newtons with me
I look over the side to the rocks in
the depths below me
they look mysterious
my God says "Work quietly with your hands"
I am told my belief is primitive
that I hold with superstition
while all others rush forward shouting and
passionate and proclaiming & busy busy busy
with their guns & their hammers
and their buildings & their walls & their ideas
with ten thousand schemes for the wind & the waves
'til the day when the dust settles
but my God has not changed his mind for all this
he says to me "Work quietly with your hands"
and I do for I have found His advice to be solid
who has killed who today ?
who will kill who tomorrow ?
I wish everyone had a small boat
& a bag of fig newtons to go out on the water
and look over the side to see
the rocks in the depths below them & inside of them
and all mysteries there

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: March 31st, 2011, 2:32 pm
by Steve Plonk
Life is full of awe & mystery...the power of God through nature...Great verse...
Thanks to you, the Mingo. 8)

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: March 31st, 2011, 2:56 pm
by the mingo
You're welcome, Steve. Thx for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: March 31st, 2011, 3:31 pm
by joel
Dear God,
be good to me,
for the sea is so wide,
and my boat is so small.

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: March 31st, 2011, 8:47 pm
by Arcadia
wow!! beautiful poem, mingo!!!!!!! :D

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 1st, 2011, 1:40 am
by the mingo
Thx for reading, Joel. 8)

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 1st, 2011, 1:46 am
by the mingo
THANKS Veronica !!

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 4th, 2011, 4:43 am
by snowman
you may work quietly with your hands but your poetry is loud and clear
write on
dave

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 4th, 2011, 9:22 am
by the mingo
Thx Dave & welcome aboard.

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 4th, 2011, 9:51 am
by SadLuckDame
I look over the side to the rocks in
the depths below me
they look mysterious
my God says "Work quietly with your hands"
Thank you, mingo.
This is like having lunch with you.

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 5th, 2011, 12:34 am
by the mingo
Thanks, Annie B. I enjoyed our lunch, hope you did too 8)

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 6th, 2011, 4:48 am
by creativesoul
this floats my boat- love fig newtons too- nice write

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 6th, 2011, 1:59 pm
by the mingo
Thx cs, and fig newtons yesterday, fig newtons today, fig newtons forever !

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 6th, 2011, 6:29 pm
by mnaz
well said.

"with their guns and hammers"... excellent

Re: the mysteries there

Posted: April 7th, 2011, 10:39 am
by the mingo
Thx, mnaz, for readin' & sayin'. Glad you enjoyed.