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Artguy
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Spring

Post by Artguy » April 5th, 2011, 10:45 am

An old one...don't know if I ever posted it here or not...

UNKNOWN SPRING

Relentless days of unknown spring
Harsh and sweet
Scent of life
Scent of death

Days of cloudless clarity
Delight in the return of the birds
Twigs in their beaks

Days of gray dome
Bone shuddering cold
Hard rain and snow
Even the daffodils are ugly

Will rebirth triumph
Will death’s gray clutch
Sink into forever winter
A tulip not yet open
Hangs it’s head and sighs

Trees still empty
Today are whisper silent
Even the crow, dull under gray ceiling
Is mute

It is resurrection
The phoenix rising
From a long winters’ ash
Giving song to feathered flight

Or is it the last spike
Driven deep
Into earth’s crusty flesh

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Re: Spring

Post by snowman » April 5th, 2011, 8:10 pm

i like the quick snapshots andcontrasts leave you wondering what the next moment brings
write on
dave

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Re: Spring

Post by dadio » April 6th, 2011, 2:36 am

descriptive poem of merit. 8)

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