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Arcadia
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directions

Post by Arcadia » April 8th, 2011, 5:19 pm

somedays I live in a caligram world
or I dream in chinese, hebrew or arab
but most of the days
I start in the west side
reach east or somewhere near
then start again
sort of zig-zag mode
slowly going from a more or less secure north
to a possible south
but lately
it´s centered
so centered
that it feels as if I´m gonna crash someone
(but it´s only me writing)

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Re: directions

Post by the mingo » April 9th, 2011, 12:33 am

8) ..."somedays I live in a caligram world" ... yeah !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: directions

Post by dadio » April 9th, 2011, 3:43 am

fine poem. 8)

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Re: directions

Post by constantine » April 9th, 2011, 6:01 am

pretty hip - i always enjoy your work, and i too work the zig-zag route.

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Re: directions

Post by revolutionrabbit » April 9th, 2011, 10:51 pm

this poemas reminds me of Julio Cortazar
that feeling of dreaming in another language
or language-ing in another poem.
it's like slouching toward the Library of Babylon
and rolling your poem in zig-zags and smoking it.

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Re: directions

Post by creativesoul » April 10th, 2011, 3:58 am

i want more
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: directions

Post by saw » April 10th, 2011, 8:07 am

the world of indecision so familiar to us all, I suspect, beautifully expressed

we try something, then we try something else....nice work, arcadia

the we try something else, else, else, else
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: directions

Post by justwalt » April 10th, 2011, 10:16 am

(................... Hmmmmmm... )

http://youtu.be/2IPBDy4Wn5I
many is a word

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Re: directions

Post by Arcadia » April 10th, 2011, 5:59 pm

gracias!, I enjoyed reading all your replies!! :)

justwalt: amazing video & with a turkish sonore band?? wow!! how did you find that...?? :lol: :wink:

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Re: directions

Post by justwalt » April 10th, 2011, 6:47 pm

one of my favs... shpongle...

try this on for size

http://youtu.be/PqANA9u7bB0

and this

http://youtu.be/o1jPeG1LlaQ





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