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directions

Posted: April 8th, 2011, 5:19 pm
by Arcadia
somedays I live in a caligram world
or I dream in chinese, hebrew or arab
but most of the days
I start in the west side
reach east or somewhere near
then start again
sort of zig-zag mode
slowly going from a more or less secure north
to a possible south
but lately
it´s centered
so centered
that it feels as if I´m gonna crash someone
(but it´s only me writing)

Re: directions

Posted: April 9th, 2011, 12:33 am
by the mingo
8) ..."somedays I live in a caligram world" ... yeah !

Re: directions

Posted: April 9th, 2011, 3:43 am
by dadio
fine poem. 8)

Re: directions

Posted: April 9th, 2011, 6:01 am
by constantine
pretty hip - i always enjoy your work, and i too work the zig-zag route.

Re: directions

Posted: April 9th, 2011, 10:51 pm
by revolutionrabbit
this poemas reminds me of Julio Cortazar
that feeling of dreaming in another language
or language-ing in another poem.
it's like slouching toward the Library of Babylon
and rolling your poem in zig-zags and smoking it.

Re: directions

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 3:58 am
by creativesoul
i want more

Re: directions

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 8:07 am
by saw
the world of indecision so familiar to us all, I suspect, beautifully expressed

we try something, then we try something else....nice work, arcadia

the we try something else, else, else, else

Re: directions

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 10:16 am
by justwalt
(................... Hmmmmmm... )

http://youtu.be/2IPBDy4Wn5I

Re: directions

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 5:59 pm
by Arcadia
gracias!, I enjoyed reading all your replies!! :)

justwalt: amazing video & with a turkish sonore band?? wow!! how did you find that...?? :lol: :wink:

Re: directions

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 6:47 pm
by justwalt
one of my favs... shpongle...

try this on for size

http://youtu.be/PqANA9u7bB0

and this

http://youtu.be/o1jPeG1LlaQ