Your father and other men
Play cards and smoke around the
Table in the other room.
Your mother sits knitting by
The fire listening to
The radio low. You sit
On the sofa reading a
Book sensing the fire’s warm
Glow. Your sister Kate is out
With that young man from the store
To see a movie and won’t
Be late. A man laughs out loud
From the other room and your
Mother looks up and shakes her
Head and knits on, the battered
Radio playing Country.
You turn a page of the book,
The characters coming to
Life, the tale unfolding. Your
Cousin Merle is upstairs with
Some girl although your mother
Doesn’t know she believes he’s
Studying hard in his room
Sitting digesting the books.
You listen for some sounds from
Upstairs, a small cry or shrill
Laughter from being tickled
Or bed springs moving, but all
Is hush, just the sounds of your
Mother knitting and men and
Your father talking and low
County music playing on
The radio. You picture
Merle on his bed keeping the
Girl’s voice down low shafting her
Real slow while out of the small
Window the full moon’s all glow.
COUNTRY MUSIC.
Re: COUNTRY MUSIC.
vivid scene, like trying to darn the hole in her denial.....pretty cool.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: COUNTRY MUSIC.
thank you, saw, for reading the poem & comments.
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Re: COUNTRY MUSIC.
Nicely written. Very typical family scene out of the fifties. Or at least, that is my perception. It could be because that was the decade of my youth and when I used to read in the living room, while Mom knitted and country music played on the radio. Or maybe on the big old wind up gramophone.
Re: COUNTRY MUSIC.
thank you for reading & comments, happytrails.
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