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black

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 8:43 am
by saw
the sable sun is my friend
not an intruder, the darkness
on the trail is the ideal theater
to exercise my faith

if I could see around the next bend
there would be no reason to go there
the ebony clouds are welcomed
not frowned upon

if I knew my fate where would
motivation come from, why get up
in the morning, this cosmic sense
of humor keeps me off the canvas

the soot-soaked rain is necessary
not bad luck, anything that can happen
to a man can happen to me, I accept this
life only exists at this very moment

that I write these words
the black sky is crucial, not unfortunate

Re: black

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 10:43 am
by dadio
I like this existential poem. typo= a intruder = an intruder.

Re: black

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 6:31 pm
by saw
thanx dadio, for the thumbs up & spotting the typo.....it's scary that you can read something so many times before posting and still screw up.....but alas, I can!

Re: black

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 6:39 pm
by Arcadia
a sort of anti?-hero in the acceptance phase... yeah, it´s not easy until it is...!

anything that can happen
to a man can happen to me, I accept this
life only exists at this very moment


enjoyed the reading saw, gracias!!!!!!! :)

Re: black

Posted: April 10th, 2011, 6:46 pm
by saw
thanx arcadia, like my Uncle Crawford used to say,"Nothing difficult, Is ever easy"

he was a down-home hayseed savant !....I wrote a poem about him, i'll see if I can find it