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snowman
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feel

Post by snowman » April 11th, 2011, 8:40 am

warm moist soft and smooth like a blue note on
a calm summer evening . string pressed down
against cold laquered wood,then released
and repeated move finger like playing chess
three steps ahead and one or two back
bass vibrates sound echoes and
you dont always hear but you always feel
and it feels good

Steve Plonk
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Re: feel

Post by Steve Plonk » April 11th, 2011, 12:37 pm

Snowman, The lyrical melody of sensation...Always good! :)

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dadio
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Re: feel

Post by dadio » April 11th, 2011, 2:46 pm

a well captured image in words. 8)

snowman
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Re: feel

Post by snowman » April 12th, 2011, 8:36 pm

steve
music and writing two reasons to keep breathing in and out

thanks dadio

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