sailors knott

[snowman]

simple but strong
the harder you pull
the stronger it gets
like an emotion, a wave wells
up from solitude slams into the vessel
that once carried love and understanding,
rising away from the dock
of your convictions,
securing the tether of doubt,
holding firm
to nothing but insecurity

[creativesoul]

i love knots
marina talk
people that like to float
it s a great lil write

[saw]

nautical wisdom is important if you don't want to drown...liked the metaphor....

[edsiejka]

Great poem..great imagery!!!

regards,


ed

[snowman]

creative soul
thanks for reading wish i could float

saw
this poem came from a challenge to sustain a metaphor throughout
glad you liked it it was tougher than i thought

ed
thanks for reading

write on
snowman

[happytrails]

Snowman, this is so good. You had me spellbound. It has been a long time since I've visited here, because of family problems and others stuff, but it looks like I have been missing a lot, since I've been gone. I think I will stick around and see what else I've been missing out on.
Thanks for the good reading material.

[snowman]

happytrails
happy to have you around and happy to be around this is a great place
write on
dave