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sailors knott
Posted: April 14th, 2011, 6:20 pm
by snowman
simple but strong
the harder you pull
the stronger it gets
like an emotion, a wave wells
up from solitude slams into the vessel
that once carried love and understanding,
rising away from the dock
of your convictions,
securing the tether of doubt,
holding firm
to nothing but insecurity
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 15th, 2011, 3:23 am
by creativesoul
i love knots
marina talk
people that like to float
it s a great lil write
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 15th, 2011, 6:54 am
by saw
nautical wisdom is important if you don't want to drown...liked the metaphor....
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 15th, 2011, 5:21 pm
by edsiejka
Great poem..great imagery!!!
regards,
ed
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 16th, 2011, 4:29 am
by snowman
creative soul
thanks for reading wish i could float
saw
this poem came from a challenge to sustain a metaphor throughout
glad you liked it it was tougher than i thought
ed
thanks for reading
write on
snowman
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 16th, 2011, 8:40 am
by happytrails
Snowman, this is so good. You had me spellbound. It has been a long time since I've visited here, because of family problems and others stuff, but it looks like I have been missing a lot, since I've been gone. I think I will stick around and see what else I've been missing out on.
Thanks for the good reading material.
Re: sailors knott
Posted: April 17th, 2011, 3:27 am
by snowman
happytrails
happy to have you around and happy to be around this is a great place
write on
dave