STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

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STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by dadio » April 15th, 2011, 2:58 pm

Stradler loves the evenings
Loves watching the girls come

Into the bar with the young
Hunks on their arms wondering

Where they go to fuck and if they’re
Any good at it and as he draws on

His cigarette he remembers Anne
The woman old enough to be his

Mother who took him in hand and
Showed him a good time in bed and

How and when and where and he
Never looked back after her never

Forgot her huge buttocks and breasts
And her loving heart and big blue

Eyes and her rib crushing thighs
And he loves the evenings and the

Jukebox jive and the hunks swinging
Their honeys about and he sitting

There watching the girls and supping
His beer and smoking his cigarette

Remembering Anne and her love of
Booze and Mahler and French cigarettes

And she bringing him into her garden of
Eve her pleasure dome and he leaving her

Dark love bites on her shoulder and thighs
All the time gazing into her big blue eyes.
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Re: STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by edsiejka » April 15th, 2011, 5:17 pm

Dadio-

All I can say is excellente. The poem and the photo are priceless.


Regards,


ed

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Re: STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by dadio » April 16th, 2011, 3:03 am

That is very good to read you say that, Ed. Thank you.

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Re: STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by snowman » April 16th, 2011, 4:37 am

reminds me of old beat poetry can imagine patrons in a smokey room listening to this while drinking coffee and snapping there fingers in time with your words
wonderful poem and great images
write on
snowman

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Re: STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by happytrails » April 16th, 2011, 8:30 am

Yes, beat poetry. I remember it. Although I was very young when it was popular and therefore never got to see it performed in the small smokey bars where it was done, we used to emulate it in our small dim basements and thought we were something to behold.

Terry, I haven't been commenting lately, because I seem to be able to say nothing but the same thing each time. Well done. This was worth reading. And all those along the same line. I read them all and appreciate your facility with words. And I envy your ability to just keep producing, day after day.

I also see you and follow you on facebook, although I don't comment on there either. You are not being ignore, just adored from afar. LOL!!!

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Re: STRADLER LOVES. ( STRONG LANGUAGE)

Post by dadio » April 16th, 2011, 11:22 am

Thank you very much snowman, for reading & commenting.

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Post by dadio » April 16th, 2011, 11:23 am

thank you very much, happytrials.

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