tech no weenie

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creativesoul
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tech no weenie

Post by creativesoul » April 26th, 2011, 1:37 am

i know that the idea seemed ok at the time
until i got blasted with thick green slime
hazzmatts are kind of loose leaf tabacco
floating inthe breeze
never enough
still a sneeze
sky hung low frontier plays all off my hips another
i go away too old not to love
see the older i get
the less i know
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Post by dadio » April 26th, 2011, 2:30 am

very good poem & theme.

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Post by snowman » April 28th, 2011, 10:58 pm

thats odd the older i get the better i was

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Re: tech no weenie

Post by creativesoul » April 29th, 2011, 8:24 pm

prove it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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