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no different than this

Posted: April 28th, 2011, 1:22 pm
by the mingo
in america the
white whore station wagon sits out
in the darkness & the rain
it strikes the heart & mind of man
& is quickly scribbled down on
waste paper and shoved into a back pocket
to protect it from the same rain that would in a moment
bleed the hasty words to unreadable smears
and to save it toward a future
no different than this

Re: no different than this

Posted: April 28th, 2011, 8:57 pm
by SadLuckDame
Yes! pockets and chemistry, moving towards the present. We're trying to trick ourselves, it's a goodie, mingo.

Re: no different than this

Posted: April 28th, 2011, 10:25 pm
by snowman
this poem turn on itself the more we try to change the way we see things the more they stay the same
write on
dave

Re: no different than this

Posted: April 29th, 2011, 1:45 am
by the mingo
why thx, Doll, I'm just about liking you all over the place. Tricks & troubles, that's all of us in spades.

Re: no different than this

Posted: April 29th, 2011, 1:46 am
by the mingo
thx, dave, yeah, that.