would have sold my soul for love before

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creativesoul
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would have sold my soul for love before

Post by creativesoul » May 1st, 2011, 4:07 am

once the tears were gone
washed and cleansed by the sea
endless savage loves
hungry wolves howling from my heart
crept out of time letting it be
speaking of all that came with a start
languid thoughts of nebulous
liquid mobilizing celluar stimulation
love was one more time
too far gone
no more fantasies to adore
no illusions to uphold
costumes left behind
sex toys thrown in the dumpster
it was finally fucking ove
no more knives
wounds
i have licked for far too long
see it is over
the song
is about love from a better place
one that doesnt not endanger solitude
intimacy and trust
commitment
was something

over time
became a greater cause
there was nothing to fight for
no thing was left to hold me
not him
not anything
i crashed
reinvented=transformed
he killed me that way
there was no more juice
i just had to run and hide
inside
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: would have sold my soul for love before

Post by dadio » May 1st, 2011, 4:30 am

reflective poem of lost love. fine work.

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Re: would have sold my soul for love before

Post by saw » May 1st, 2011, 7:15 am

when we come from a troubled past, we often will do anything to plug the void of loveless existence.....we dive in head first, unafraid that that the pool might not have any water in it....who cares....it's better than nothing.....try this, then try something else...then something else.....it must be there somewhere .....

I left home at 17, lookin' for love, and whatever else might be out there.....went at it full bore...damn the torpedoes ......so I can relate......honest work, c-soul...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: would have sold my soul for love before

Post by Arcadia » May 1st, 2011, 10:00 am

lost somehow between begginning and end... bravo, c-soul!!!! :)

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Re: would have sold my soul for love before

Post by creativesoul » May 1st, 2011, 12:49 pm

thanx- so many common threads- aloha-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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