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dressed

Posted: May 8th, 2011, 9:28 am
by the mingo
sometimes a poem
is the moving shadow of
a wasp behind the blind

sometimes it's a woman
reaching down to itch her leg
just before getting

dressed

Re: dressed

Posted: May 8th, 2011, 11:02 am
by saw
two terrific depictions of what a poem can sometimes be...the economy of this one adds eve more power to the message........I dig it...

Re: dressed

Posted: May 8th, 2011, 12:31 pm
by the mingo
thx, saw. glad ya enjoyed it.