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terms

Posted: May 13th, 2011, 12:39 pm
by the mingo
crabgrass in the sand
holds great significance for the writer.
great hold great tight of a road that begins
in your bowels and reaches all the way
to the heart - you know what i'm sayin'
I could watch you pound butter too and
the look on your face as you did it
no one knows how many hats you have in your closet
but i'm sure you could provide one for every dead officer
of the Seventh Cavalry or any of your other lovers
i like the noises you make when you read your stuff
in that youtube vid and even though your voice is low
i could hear it clear over & under & through
all the yelling & screaming indians in that valley
'til not a whiteman was on his feet
only a white babe like you could write that
even though it's true that the crabgrass
will dictate the terms

Re: terms

Posted: May 14th, 2011, 4:00 am
by SadLuckDame
mingo, you have such a light approach and playful nature to your writing,
it's so refreshing and feel great, feel fun, being with the words you choose.
Loving it. From painting to writing poets, to writing poetries.

Re: terms

Posted: May 14th, 2011, 5:32 am
by the mingo
thx Dame 8) i love zinging around going bing! bing! bing! it's some wacked shit i come across but it sure is fun. 8)

Re: terms

Posted: May 14th, 2011, 10:40 am
by saw
true grit....smile.......