a red sea

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the mingo
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a red sea

Post by the mingo » May 27th, 2011, 1:41 pm

i breathe in as birds
search for worms beyond the passing rain
signs flash at me & history,
dressed as a '67 chrysler,
rounds a long gone curve like a hebrew
emerging on the far side
of a red sea
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: a red sea

Post by Arcadia » May 27th, 2011, 6:55 pm

:)
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Re: a red sea

Post by the mingo » May 28th, 2011, 12:35 am

thx Veronica :~)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: a red sea

Post by mousey1 » May 28th, 2011, 2:12 pm

Oh I like this. A treasure of a gem.
I used to walk with my head in the clouds but I kept getting struck by lightning!
Now my head twitches and I drool alot. Anonymouse

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