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Sometimes to see you is so far

Posted: May 31st, 2011, 5:23 pm
by Perdida
Sometimes to see you is so far
as if you were an island in the horizon
remote:

but when a change in tide
carries you to me like a small boat
tugging

oh how my ears
prick
to the sound of your waves

i feel the rush of you

and i am anchored
by your sea music.

(C)Maria De Liseo 181210

Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Posted: June 1st, 2011, 12:53 am
by the mingo
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Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Posted: June 1st, 2011, 2:49 pm
by dadio
fine poem & theme.

Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Posted: June 1st, 2011, 5:30 pm
by Arcadia
lovely, Maree...! :D gracias for sharing it!

Re: Sometimes to see you is so far

Posted: July 12th, 2011, 2:24 am
by Exsurgent
Lovely imageries, in a series of analogies.
Specially liked the crowning ending.

"and i am anchored
by your sea music."
Nicely written!