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Axanderdeath
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Post by Axanderdeath » February 7th, 2005, 7:59 pm

"Don't think about it like it is that important." Said the tall happy looking dread-locked girl. She had candy red lips.
"I don't think it's too important.." The short kid with glasses said. He did not believe what he said, and neither did anyone else. "Only a poser would get bent out of shape about something like that."

Sandra and huck were friends. I was not their friend. I sat in the corner and listened.

"Well Huck it seems like you care too much about it. It is just a silly paper. So what if you got a low mark."
"I failed."
"Not by grade."
"no but a b- is not a good grade."

I could not help but smile. All through High school if I had ever gotten a b- my folks would of bought me a car or some shit like that. Here are these two too smart kids getting bogged down about something I would consider an accomplishment. If I was his friend I would not try and cheer him up though. In fact people like that could never be my friend. I would have to be a different person. So really it is impossible to know what I would say.

"I had to go to New York and greece though. I hate having to travel too much."

TOO MUCH TRAVEL? TO NEW YORK AND GREECE??!!

"I know huck that is a drag. I wish I could just study all the time.." Candy lips said. She had noticed my expression. I liked the way she glanced over at me. It said "hey! I got you man! What you up to?" I like it when girls are like this. It makes me feel sexy for a moment and then I look around for the guy she is really looking at. This time He was not around.

"Sandra are you smiling at him?"
"who?" Candy lips says starring right at my like I was a temporarily alive animal in her sights.
"That drunk!" I took a slug of my beer. Why even try.
"So what he is kind of cute."
"Come on Sandra let's go." Geek boy who hates greece and New York and sandra with her Candy lips walked out of my life. I sat there with a half a chuby and beer.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 7th, 2005, 8:35 pm

neat clip, AD

Much easier to read than last pieces.

Still imaginative and edgy.

Personal and insightful. I like it.
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by Axanderdeath » February 7th, 2005, 8:38 pm

thanks. Used spell check, and read it over once.

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Post by Lightning Rod » February 7th, 2005, 8:56 pm

see Geoff
you are talking to the wurld's wurst spellar here.
it just takes a little more effert to git it write
thank god for spel checkar
like Mark Twain said, "I'm suspicious of someone's
imagination if they can only think of one way to spell a word."
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Post by hester_prynne » February 7th, 2005, 9:39 pm

No lie!

Golden little vignette here A.D.

enjoyed reading it.

H 8)

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