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the mingo
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all before

Post by the mingo » June 24th, 2011, 1:26 am

art+community
upper limits without regret
how does that
help us ?
it can't even save the earth
ourselves or the water
or the air
maybe you should buy a dog
take up model railroading
or go stand in a graveyard until
truth (yes, truth) dawns on the mind
vermin have advanced to the point
of building schools & settlements & economies
I'm cool about being a citizen here
but somebody else is going
to have to clean the place or
pick through the rubble
each earthquake leaves behind
go ahead, drag your house
up each & every hill
the land is not free
and it's not about money
but you'll need a job
& a car to drive home in after work
& songs to listen to
even if you've heard them
all before
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: all before

Post by Arcadia » June 24th, 2011, 5:47 pm

maybe you should buy a dog
take up model railroading
or go stand in a graveyard until
truth (yes, truth) dawns on the mind


it doesn´t sound as a good idea...! :roll: :lol: Loved the poem, gracias!!!!! :)

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Re: all before

Post by stilltrucking » June 24th, 2011, 5:56 pm

there is a lot of truth in graveyards.

as for the mess, leave it for the archeologists from one million A.F. to dig up.
we are dropping a big load of knowledge for them





thanks for the poetry I can use.

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Re: all before

Post by the mingo » June 25th, 2011, 8:19 am

8) one thing you can say 'bout war is that it is certainly a well respected tradition, practiced faithfully by generation after generation without fail.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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