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ching young village
Posted: June 25th, 2011, 6:19 am
by creativesoul
people come around like dave, who was a professional butler all his life and now lives in a van wherever he parks it..i was eating my rice and veggies when i see dave looking older than usual- yet i sure that what i claim and what is really mine are not the same tonight...and i was suddenly reminded of spot our dalmation who hated ms chings cats- so she paid my husband to build a big cat house for all the cats...but spot never gave up-dave lives back behind my shop= my friends all have broken bodies but not broken souls-what once seemed soiled was now beauty=what left with you was me- the piece i want and have taken back- get a life- stop trying to steal my soul
Re: ching young village
Posted: June 28th, 2011, 3:34 am
by dadio
fine prose poem. reminds me of Pound's translations...
Re: ching young village
Posted: June 28th, 2011, 11:46 am
by saw
there is a hint of desperate times, but that is met with defiance....I like the confrontation c-soul
Re: ching young village
Posted: June 30th, 2011, 1:32 pm
by creativesoul
there is a stalker on here- i used to love- and they think they are really slick writing or whatever they do-so it is subtle but the mother fucker isnt posting in here anymore now is he?
sorry sisters and brothers- i was onto it anyway- check it out from that angle... yeah it is a piece- lol
Re: ching young village
Posted: June 30th, 2011, 4:00 pm
by mnaz
love anything to do with declarations of independence. sing the freedom songs ...
Re: ching young village
Posted: July 18th, 2011, 11:20 pm
by creativesoul
thanx aloha..