Isthilien

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footballbutterfly
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Isthilien

Post by footballbutterfly » June 28th, 2011, 1:03 am

In the land of endless night
where moonlit meadows whisper plights
and lovers lapse in stormy rites
Three warriors set out to cross
the thickened Fog where much is lost
Only when the five are found
can Ia claim her hallowed ground
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Re: Isthilien

Post by dadio » June 28th, 2011, 3:33 am

journey poem, very good.

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Re: Isthilien

Post by hester_prynne » June 28th, 2011, 11:33 pm

Indeed a stellar write, the tone is soothing and mysterious!
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Re: Isthilien

Post by footballbutterfly » July 1st, 2011, 1:05 am

Ia's Plight
She walks the silent night
A shadow of herself
Amongst the wraiths
And spoils of Brother's war
Her children scattered
Bloodied and lost
An Echo is born
She slips beyond the Fog
A smile catching her lips
And so it begins
At the end
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Re: Isthilien

Post by saw » July 1st, 2011, 10:44 am

good stuff....both parts.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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