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the mingo
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her breasts

Post by the mingo » July 1st, 2011, 9:06 am

a native hypertale
of crayfish in the belly
on both coasts
could anything be more real ?
the bones of the everyday spotlight
soften & weaken before a name can be made
and the heart of man becomes
within him a glass booth as he realizes
the fruit is very very long and
goes on giving & giving & giving
"I guess I was selfish" I heard the captain say
though I never knew him to speak foolishly of freedom
or the price for shipping & handling
the mystery surfaces and
it is a construct posing as
a conceit - is it i before e or ?
a far off star explodes
and the fingernails of the colored girl
turn turquoise as she crosses them
in front of
and over
and before
her breasts
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: her breasts

Post by saw » July 1st, 2011, 10:42 am

I really like this, the imagery at the end is superb....i guess it is a supernova...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: her breasts

Post by dadio » July 1st, 2011, 3:29 pm

yes, I concur with saw. 8)

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Re: her breasts

Post by the mingo » July 2nd, 2011, 12:44 am

8) Thx, saw & Terry.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: her breasts

Post by hester_prynne » July 2nd, 2011, 2:01 am

8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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