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her breasts

Posted: July 1st, 2011, 9:06 am
by the mingo
a native hypertale
of crayfish in the belly
on both coasts
could anything be more real ?
the bones of the everyday spotlight
soften & weaken before a name can be made
and the heart of man becomes
within him a glass booth as he realizes
the fruit is very very long and
goes on giving & giving & giving
"I guess I was selfish" I heard the captain say
though I never knew him to speak foolishly of freedom
or the price for shipping & handling
the mystery surfaces and
it is a construct posing as
a conceit - is it i before e or ?
a far off star explodes
and the fingernails of the colored girl
turn turquoise as she crosses them
in front of
and over
and before
her breasts

Re: her breasts

Posted: July 1st, 2011, 10:42 am
by saw
I really like this, the imagery at the end is superb....i guess it is a supernova...

Re: her breasts

Posted: July 1st, 2011, 3:29 pm
by dadio
yes, I concur with saw. 8)

Re: her breasts

Posted: July 2nd, 2011, 12:44 am
by the mingo
8) Thx, saw & Terry.

Re: her breasts

Posted: July 2nd, 2011, 2:01 am
by hester_prynne
8)