House of Womb

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the mingo
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House of Womb

Post by the mingo » July 5th, 2011, 9:10 am

there are several wombs
gathered around the garden
you could call them vaginas
but then you'd just be naming the door
and not the house
they are talking while
weeding the flowers
there is laughter
some are kneeling working the earth
with trowels in their hands
others are walking around
carrying shovels
a man passing by on a tractor
looks & smiles & waves
the wombs smile back at him
and return his wave
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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constantine
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Re: House of Womb

Post by constantine » July 17th, 2011, 5:54 pm

this is pretty cool - evocative

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Re: House of Womb

Post by dadio » July 18th, 2011, 2:54 am

Fine work. 8)

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Re: House of Womb

Post by the mingo » July 18th, 2011, 7:36 am

Thx, Dino. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: House of Womb

Post by the mingo » July 18th, 2011, 7:37 am

And thx to you too, Terry.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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