Transfixed Again.

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dadio
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Transfixed Again.

Post by dadio » July 14th, 2011, 3:11 am

Transfixed again
by her hair

and the way
she does that thing

with her lips,
the way

the glossed lips smile,
and her eyes

how they peer
into your eyes

and reach right in
and pull out

handful by handful
each aspect

of your love for her.
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Re: Transfixed Again.

Post by saw » July 23rd, 2011, 12:29 pm

very good.....the economy works well with the subject....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Transfixed Again.

Post by dadio » July 23rd, 2011, 2:02 pm

Thank you Saw.

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