ching young village 2

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creativesoul
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ching young village 2

Post by creativesoul » July 18th, 2011, 11:34 pm

a while back mr larry ching died, leaving behind jenny and mike and steveie-- jeff is the manager =and way back -molested my friend s son- now the kid black males him- which i like.I spend my days erasing what happened many years ago-
they touched hawaiian bones= no one will listen -
but the all four of the sons have had a horrific life-the mother was evil to the bone-they were my nieghbors- and i listened to them fighting and shooting off guns for years- the tales of abuse and murder all came from that house- and finally-the demise=the kapu that was broken is only about the males- the family lost custody of its only male to the state..I can see each of them in my minds eye and that they know since they are on the other side- what is not right- anymore-
the gray place is only for a short time- the shadow knows when they are going to find you..larry ching could only feel half his body for the rest of his life-2yrs- and well-almost everyone that has been touched by this energy has suffered-so i get the hit that maybe there is something to putting the little toys on the burial plots...i am not so familar with what ceremonies they do-but my understanding it is similar=as someone i know that has been brought back twice told me=larry had billons of dollars when he died= but he couldnt take it with him when he left= that was my third husband s hanai father= he was tormented when he died-his own father died two weeks before he was born- he was a great step father- and was heart broken when this man died-actully- he got burned by his friend mike ching for the house he was promised...
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: ching young village 2

Post by dadio » July 19th, 2011, 3:34 am

dark tales, well captured. :shock:

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Re: ching young village 2

Post by saw » July 19th, 2011, 6:56 am

a classic story of you-can't-take-it-with-you-when-you-go......black secrecy abounds.
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Re: ching young village 2

Post by stilltrucking » July 19th, 2011, 9:24 am

a new tradition for me
I never saw back east
people here leave stones on the graves they visit

I always try to take one with me when I go to her grave
next time I will leave a sea shell I found.

thanks for writing

a poem that strikes close to home for me

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Re: ching young village 2

Post by creativesoul » July 20th, 2011, 3:23 am

funny i have a seashell around my neck today-----
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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