can't always pen those
upbeat rhythms
sometimes a writer likes
to get down and dirty
like a bluesman
telling his truth in a gravel voice
altered by an austere biography
from the other side of the tracks
it's us and them !
ahh, the romance
you gotta love
the simplicity
the vietnamese know
what terrorists look like
so do the elders
in nagasaki
but these didn't match
any of the neo-definitions
man, who should have the authority
to decide all this
what nation, group, sect
organization has the final say
to send out the all-points bulletins
to nail up the wanted posters
on every protruding telephone pole,
shit, industrial slaughter alone
is so sophisticated it puts a three piece suit
on barbarism
makes the psychopath
not seem like such a bad guy
the language of war
is the king's english
speaking the language
speaking the language
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: speaking the language
Why is it I love everything you write? Is it because you have my voice..? The words, the expressions I cannot find..I wonder...for things that cloud my mind. What robs my slumber, at the ceiling all nite I stare. Thoughts I cannot bring myself to share. I secretly have a crush on your mind.
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Re: speaking the language
Strong poem & theme and done well.
- revolutionrabbit
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Re: speaking the language
i liked this it had a kind of stack up
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