Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

Never more
to have her place

her hand
through your chest

to pull out your heart
and let it hang there

dripping blood
or squeeze it

to make those
squishy sounds

as she said
she loved you

most of all.
She died

in another’s arms
with their heart

in her hands
you recall.

"as she said
she loved you

most of all.
She died

in another’s arms "

Ouch... Sorry I couldn't muster a better response than that.

"Ouch" pretty well sounds that up. Thank you.lol.

nice work - lean and sensitive.

thank you, my friend.

a classic tale of mixed messages, the kind that frustrate the mind, the soul.....like the economy that drives it...

Thank you, Saw.

Very, very expressive. I liked it though sad and raw the emotion.

Thank you, theirishea