Old Mrs Truber.

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Old Mrs Truber.

Post by dadio » August 4th, 2011, 7:42 am

Always be yourself, Mrs Truber said,
Don’t be what you’re not. You sat
And studied her as she sat opposite
Stirring her cup of tea, took in her
Greying hair, her lined features, the
Way her bony fingers held the spoon
That stirred. People try to be like others
And find themselves out of their depth
And drown in the waters of lies and deceit,
She added, bringing her light blue eyes
On you. You began to speak, but the words
Were stuck in your throat. She smiled and
Tapped your hand. We are what we are,
She said, but often we are tempted to become
Actors wearing a different mask, trying to
Be a different person. You nodded slowly
And thought how beautiful she must have
Been once. Her eyes sparkled as she spoke,
And as she brushed her hand through her grey
Hair, you thought you caught a glimpse of her
Youthful self peering out of eyes like a child
Staring from windows in a locked up room.
You sipped your tea and watched as she brought
Her hands together as if in prayer. You closed
Your eyes, but when you opened them again,
The room was empty and she wasn’t there.
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Re: Old Mrs Truber.

Post by creativesoul » August 4th, 2011, 1:30 pm

really like this one
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Old Mrs Truber.

Post by dadio » August 4th, 2011, 2:45 pm

thank you for reading, creativesoul.

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Re: Old Mrs Truber.

Post by Kailashana » August 4th, 2011, 4:03 pm

Hi Terry, I was almost miffed at the *once beautiful*... we are so youth-oriented in this country...until I got to the end.... and I sighed deeply.

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Re: Old Mrs Truber.

Post by dadio » August 5th, 2011, 4:00 am

When I was nursing centuries ago, there was this 104 lady and she was beautifully old and yet had retained that beauty. Thank you for reading.

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