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Seppuku

Posted: August 7th, 2011, 8:14 am
by Kailashana
I commit seppuku on blank paper,
spill my guts onto its pristine emptiness
stark and bloodied words fall out
mix with my warm entrails

these wounds are never healed
they open every time I feel
they open every time I write

they open me to what flows
through my mind,
into my heart
coursing the rivers of my being
on the way
to your eyes.

2009

Re: Seppuku

Posted: August 7th, 2011, 3:10 pm
by Steve Plonk
We all "spill our guts" from time to time...
Sometimes, what we spill comes out shiny,
like this poem of yours. Keep posting 'em!

Re: Seppuku

Posted: August 8th, 2011, 8:45 pm
by Perdida
all i can say is Halleluja to spilling guts....

i like yur work :)

Re: Seppuku

Posted: August 9th, 2011, 2:17 am
by sonofthesun
hey Perdida, enjoyed your spilling. smiles

Re: Seppuku

Posted: August 9th, 2011, 3:56 am
by creativesoul
break on thru