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creativesoul
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like getting kissed

Post by creativesoul » August 8th, 2011, 5:42 pm

al pacino in dog day afternoon says
"kiss me= i liked getting kissed when i am getting fucked"
oh yeah i get that one

the things that hurt yesterday
only hurt when i see your cocaine shrunken shadow
lurking around
wanting absurd help

the bike you bought
is nice
but you look terrible sugar
that red-brown shit like energy is still floating around you
i loved getting kissed when you fucked me
i am doing fine thanks for asking
while basking in the legend in your mind=so blind
yes i still love you= i just had to put it somewhere it cannot hurt me anymore
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: like getting kissed

Post by saw » August 9th, 2011, 9:13 am

I can relate c-soul, the poem speaks to me of the very complicated nature of relationship, the empathy that dwindles long after the heartache has morphed into a healthier garden to live in.....it speaks to me that we needn't hate anyone...be it a former lover or our self.. ....our eyes simply evolve, so we can see in new ways.........
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: like getting kissed

Post by creativesoul » August 9th, 2011, 1:52 pm

thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback= always a pleasure!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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