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like getting kissed

Posted: August 8th, 2011, 5:42 pm
by creativesoul
al pacino in dog day afternoon says
"kiss me= i liked getting kissed when i am getting fucked"
oh yeah i get that one

the things that hurt yesterday
only hurt when i see your cocaine shrunken shadow
lurking around
wanting absurd help

the bike you bought
is nice
but you look terrible sugar
that red-brown shit like energy is still floating around you
i loved getting kissed when you fucked me
i am doing fine thanks for asking
while basking in the legend in your mind=so blind
yes i still love you= i just had to put it somewhere it cannot hurt me anymore

Re: like getting kissed

Posted: August 9th, 2011, 9:13 am
by saw
I can relate c-soul, the poem speaks to me of the very complicated nature of relationship, the empathy that dwindles long after the heartache has morphed into a healthier garden to live in.....it speaks to me that we needn't hate anyone...be it a former lover or our self.. ....our eyes simply evolve, so we can see in new ways.........

Re: like getting kissed

Posted: August 9th, 2011, 1:52 pm
by creativesoul
thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback= always a pleasure!