Incommunicado

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Kailashana
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Incommunicado

Post by Kailashana » August 9th, 2011, 8:16 am

I will not let time enter into the fray
the albatross is already perched high
scanning the grey sea with grey eyes.

My amusement with god wears thin,
my coat is frayed and moths are done
with their hunger, there's a silk thread
dangling from my sleeve and it offers
a lifeline,
just remember I'm neither the black swan
nor the white,
I don't copulate with justification, my long
neck won't break the chains of fascination,
my toes are not pointers to some other destination,
rolling off the track in a runaway train.

We break the ice like this sometimes,
poets don't always have the right words.
Apologies don't come easy
as throwing salt on old wounds,
stringing words together in the shape of a punchline,
the raw sex of it throws me off balance.

saw
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Re: Incommunicado

Post by saw » August 9th, 2011, 9:25 am

great stuff.....love the language you use to move this with rolling steam down the tracks you lay with eloquence ....

" my amusement with god wears thin,
my coat is frayed and moths are done
with their hunger,......" ..........................says so much with so little

just a great poem top to bottom....if I cite any more, I'll have rewritten the poem
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: Incommunicado

Post by the mingo » August 9th, 2011, 12:37 pm

I think I just saw something move 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Incommunicado

Post by creativesoul » August 9th, 2011, 1:55 pm

awesome- saw -yeah this is rock and roll= keep going =great lines!wont sleep with justification-tasty morsel
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Arcadia
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Re: Incommunicado

Post by Arcadia » August 9th, 2011, 7:35 pm

oddly, I relate the word "comunicado" with the "Comunicado del Estado Mayor Conjunto número...." during the early eighties... kind of relief to read a text titled "incomunicado"... :lol: Great poems, kailashana, gracias for sharing them with us! :D

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