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the unbelievable saga of a nice guy

Posted: August 11th, 2011, 8:05 am
by saw
I've acquired this,
this late onset stage of disease
this condition of wanting
to do good, or at least no harm
I know, I know, weird right ?
but I gotta tell ya man
every time I do it, good that is
I feel a little healthier, so I've
become this exorcised jungle cat
that hunts opportunities
to be nice, and it's highly addictive
the nicer you are, the nicer you want to be
you can't help but want to know
where the ceiling is, the utmost high
of thoughtfulness, so naturally you wander
the earth a hedonistic do-gooder
looking for little old ladies
to help across six lanes of rush
hour traffic, you manically search
like a big floating smiley face
with arms, and legs, and an over-inflated heart
looking for your next desperate fix

Re: the unbelievable saga of a nice guy

Posted: August 11th, 2011, 11:26 am
by Kailashana
what can I saw?

Re: the unbelievable saga of a nice guy

Posted: August 11th, 2011, 1:49 pm
by the mingo
so naturally you wander
the earth a hedonistic do-gooder
This whole piece cracked me up but especially the line I've quoted here.

Sparkle on the Monkey Train, amigo. 8)

Re: the unbelievable saga of a nice guy

Posted: August 12th, 2011, 7:01 am
by judih
consuming altruist
pursuing good samaritan
one drunk man

Re: the unbelievable saga of a nice guy

Posted: August 12th, 2011, 9:35 am
by saw
thanx kailashana mingo and judih.......loved your comments.....after all, I write to connect....see if my signals are reaching anybody....beep beep beep.....thanx !