the egg looked lonely this morning

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Kailashana
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the egg looked lonely this morning

Post by Kailashana » August 12th, 2011, 2:27 pm

Nirvana came suddenly
this morning when my breakfast sizzled
rings of Saturn formed
hands and fingers of my potter’s wheel,

”Clay….it’s all about the clay!” you say.

I hold myself up to the light,
find I am broken inside.

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Re: the egg looked lonely this morning

Post by dadio » August 12th, 2011, 3:27 pm

Sad poem.
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Re: the egg looked lonely this morning

Post by saw » August 13th, 2011, 8:53 am

the translucent fragility gives us away........tight....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: the egg looked lonely this morning

Post by judih » August 13th, 2011, 9:11 am

ah, but the finding!
wonderful piece
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