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Bus Girl.

Posted: August 15th, 2011, 3:42 am
by dadio
That girl on the bus
Buddha-like, overfed, died.
More now are sitting.

Re: Bus Girl.

Posted: August 15th, 2011, 5:01 am
by saw
quite a painting, expressive beyond words really, but the brevity of your poem adds the punch necessary to get close.......

Re: Bus Girl.

Posted: August 15th, 2011, 7:56 am
by dadio
Thank you, Saw.