Inner Thigh.

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dadio
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Inner Thigh.

Post by dadio » August 21st, 2011, 4:09 am

Why doesn't he touch
my inner thigh?

She watches him
unfolding her some tale,

some family history
that leaves her cold.

His hands fold
against his knees

and he relates,
his eyes not on her

but above her head,
gazing at some yesteryear,

and all she wants
is that human touch,

that skin on skin,
lips to lips,

hand to hand.
She lets out a sigh.

Why he won't touch
my inner thigh?
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saw
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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by saw » August 21st, 2011, 8:14 am

sometimes words just get in the way, should take a vacation........for the more
prurient communications.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by dadio » August 21st, 2011, 11:07 am

Indeedy. Thank you.

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by Steve Plonk » August 21st, 2011, 11:13 am

Dadio, Goes double for me...Such a tasty poem! Yes...yes! 8)

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by dadio » August 21st, 2011, 4:36 pm

The title was suggested to me, the rest just came( Ok Muse you did most of it). Thank you, Steve.

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by Kailashana » August 22nd, 2011, 12:09 pm

Seems the muse is the inner thigh.

;-)

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by dadio » August 22nd, 2011, 12:53 pm

Lol, you naughty girl. Maybe, Anna.

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by mnaz » August 22nd, 2011, 6:28 pm

if he only knew...

(should your 2nd to last line perhaps be, "why won't he touch" ?)

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Re: Inner Thigh.

Post by dadio » August 23rd, 2011, 2:35 am

Thank you, mnaz. You are right.

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