Spoon feeding each other
the rain
moaning with the thunder
zig-zag bodies convulsing
but you didn't like the poem
I wrote afterwards,
you said
it didn't do anything for you
and there weren't any lines
that jarred you
but hey, I could have said
sex wasn't earth-shattering
but I won't.
and all you could say is "better".
All I could think is yeah, it better
be better or this metaphor will
walk out the door.
"He loves me."
p.s. No poets were harmed in the making of this poem
(He said yet, as of this moment.)
morning sex during a thunderstorm
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morning sex during a thunderstorm
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Re: morning sex during a thunderstorm
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Re: morning sex during a thunderstorm
My poet-partner keeps me honest.
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Re: morning sex during a thunderstorm
Sex and poems are to enjoy. Let's don't be critical. There are too many negatives in the world. Let all your storms of passion be loving.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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Re: morning sex during a thunderstorm
"The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm."
Smiles.
Smiles.
Re: morning sex during a thunderstorm
'A lot of sex on here! Getting kinda jealous!!'
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Lovely Poem Kailashana
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A good friend is what you are
and what I aspire to be,
keep my company until
I close my eyes Forever.
and what I aspire to be,
keep my company until
I close my eyes Forever.
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